(Thanks to R.A.D. Stainforth ... with a small contribution from Amy the cat ...)
In the space between the crash
and
pull of this wave,
I give you a landlocked heart,
chest
deep, tumbled
incandescent
as sea glass.
Turn
it over,
examine
it
in
the palm of your hand.
See
how important it is,
how
far it traveled.
Press
it
to
your lips,
feel
the soft-spoken stone
whisper
bottle green
in
your listening mouth.
Let
it dissolve whole,
release
the saved-up thirst,
the
delicate, jellied passion.
All
you hear is the sea.
Nothing
else matters.
tk/ March 2013
Meal Beach, Burra Isles, Shetland by Robin Gosnall |
A beautiful piece. I enjoyed reading it
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ReplyDeleteOne of my favourites. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI love this one ...my favourite Atlantic beach is by my sister's cottage in Donegal where the elements blow free and the days are often soft....very tender words here. Thankyou Willow!
ReplyDeleteWhen all you hear is the sea, it`s true - nothing else matters.
ReplyDeleteI'm a sea person. Only temporarily banished; but I shall return.
ReplyDelete"A landlocked heart"... I can feel that inside of myself!
ReplyDeleteThose last two lines....lovely getting there!
ReplyDeleteSo lyrical and lovely, Tess. Wonderful images.
ReplyDeleteMoments when nothing else matters are magical. Great words.
ReplyDeletelove, love, love the whisper of bottle green....sigh.xx
ReplyDeleteDelicious!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem to go with a beautiful picture..
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteLandlocked heart- interesting, thanks!
ReplyDeleteThe sea transforms ordinary green glass into something special.
ReplyDeleteLet it dissolve whole,
ReplyDeleterelease the saved-up thirst,
the delicate, jellied passion
Sensuously beautiful word craft Tess! It makes for young hearts to be peacefully together. Thanks for the regular hosting, Ma'am!
Hank
Beautiful reminds me of collecting sea glass with my husband on Vancouver Island...bkm
ReplyDeleteMmm, this is lovely:
ReplyDeletefeel the soft-spoken stone
whisper bottle green
in your listening mouth
This is my new favorite.
ReplyDeleteThe sea , the sea !, she has thrown this one up from the depths , thanks
ReplyDeleteIt is all that matters...well said!
ReplyDeleteHugs
SueAnn
really enjoyed this :-) love sea glass and its beauty from being tumbled and softened by waves - great way to use it in your poem
ReplyDeleteFantastic piece. Isn't it amazing how, I think, the first sense that this picture tingles is the sense of sound? It's like the pic has an audible nature to it! You captured that beautifully here. Fantastic as always.
ReplyDeleteEvery bit as lovely as the prompt, which is saying a lot.
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I love the sound of the sea.
ReplyDeleteExceptional..beauty and such longing..the poem fulfills itself!
ReplyDeleteAt first I thought what can I say that I haven't already said in my post for Sepia Saturday this week? We had the sea as our photo prompt there as well, but then I knew deep inside my love for the sea and water will carry me on! Your photo choice is perfect Tess, thank you.
ReplyDeleteLove, the beach and jellied hearts :)
ReplyDeleteWhat more is there?
I adore this
Wow, likening the sound of the heart to the sea is simply unexpectedly great, Tess.
ReplyDeleteTess.....such beauty - both your words and the evocative reading from Monsieur Stainworth.....not forgetting the timely and apropos *comments* from Amy!
ReplyDeleteI had a long, tiring day - the fog has come in...and reading/listening to this brought warmth right back to me! Thanks to all THREE!
Love,
♥ Robin ♥
Glistens with beauty. Definitely worthy of a 'read by' and a several times reading by these eyes.
ReplyDeleteLoved this - and I miss the sea...
ReplyDeleteDelicious, delicious, delicious.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
This one makes me ache...
ReplyDeleteI looked forward to see where this picture would take your words! I love your first stanza! A beautiful poem of giving your heart to another.
ReplyDeleteI loved this - "Let it dissolve whole,release the saved-up thirst,the delicate, jellied passion. All you hear is the sea.Nothing else matters." ... you are an artist with words ...
ReplyDeleteI'm swept away with the beauty of this poem! I hope you experienced even a slice of this poem for yourself. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteI love how you engage all the senses in this poem. A joy to read!!
ReplyDeleteA heart that has travelled far deserves to be savoured at last. Wonderfully descriptive .
ReplyDeleteSigh.......:-)
ReplyDeleteNow this is the poem I wish I had written in response to the beautiful photo. Your poem is, for me, the perfect expression of all the emotions that could be lovingly teased from the image. It is one of my favorites of yours, Tess.
ReplyDeleteAh! I just played the video and R.A.D.'s reading is one of his best, and his loving glance over to kitty was really special. ^.^
ReplyDeleteMy favorite reading of R.A.D.'s so far...
DeleteOh hell Tess - this is magnificent. I am a water sign - the beach pic stunning, your words are equally.
ReplyDeleteI love your beautiful blog good job Thanks lot for this useful article
ReplyDeletebeautiful and really evocative
ReplyDeletepardon me whilst I towel off.
ReplyDelete"In the space between the crash
ReplyDeleteand pull of this wave"
The perfect beginning, and the rest follows naturally. Lovely!
Thank you, dear readers, for your kind and generous comments...they mean so very much to me...you're the best...
ReplyDeleteI had to read this one aloud. Lovely...
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