Surrounded by desert island books
and
ever-present scorpions,
I
pass coconut time, la la la,
scrubbing
the ken of tombstones,
pick
at the all-you-can-eat buffet.
Until
something pleasant rocks
on
the vacant horizon ―
your
unexpected boat
floats
like the moon in a day-blue sky,
some
far-off classical station plays Bach.
You
stand as if you know me,
toss
a life ring my direction.
I
squint, wade out for a better view,
doggy
paddle slow at first,
wonder
if Picasso had a stomach ache, too.
Sea
streams from my nose.
You
grab me with gosling hands,
pull
me on board ―
feed
me minestrone by osmosis,
turn
me into a bouquet of roses.
tk/March 2013
Image by TheFoxAndTheRaven
love it, Tess!!!
ReplyDeleteI taste the salt in this dream.
ReplyDeleteLovely, Tess. I especially like:
ReplyDeletefloats like the moon in a day-blue sky
http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2013/03/ensconced-in-his-love.html
strangely romantic. lovely images to dwell on.
ReplyDeletehave a great day.
...like the playfulness in your imagery today Tess... ha...i'm excited to hear R.A.D. read...the la..la...la... part... smiles...
ReplyDeleteHope you came back for a listen Kelvin...sounds a lot like "Moon River" to me...
Deletethere are ways & ways of being shipwrecked, and ways & ways of being rescued - you give the whole idea of it new life and in a very romantic way...
ReplyDeleteyour unexpected boat
floats like the moon in a day-blue sky,
some far-off classical station plays Bach.
mmm
Oh dear...mine seems too dark now.
ReplyDeleteGreat read, as usual!
ReplyDeletethis is such a rich gorgeous poem Tess.
ReplyDeleteI like the phrase "gosling hands." Who wouldn't want to be turned into a bouquet of roses?
ReplyDeleteGreat words. Romantic and exciting adventure at the same time.
ReplyDeleteI loved it ... well written !!!
ReplyDeletedreamy...x
ReplyDelete"Shipwrecked." I've been shipwrecked, and it's a bit like that...
ReplyDeleteAin't love grand?
ReplyDeleteLike a piping hot Turkish towel :)
Here comes Picasso-! I do think when you get to the point of exhaustion from swimming- your vision flickers
ReplyDeletewith shapes and colors much like his work! Thanks
Gorgeous, Tess! It reads like a dream.
ReplyDeleteSo very, very not bad ;-) Love RAD's read. Just fabulous, all told...fabulous.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dr. Linthead...yes this just might be one of R.A.D.'s best reads ever...
Deleteanother well done poem Tess...enjoyed it lots
ReplyDelete...and together they shall sail- bodies as one!
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous. What a rescue!
ReplyDeleteI should know better than to read your poems. Lines like
ReplyDelete"feed me minestrone by osmosis,
turn me into a bouquet of roses".
will stay with me the entire day now.
And I don't even like minestrone soup.
I take that as the highest of compliments, Alan...thank you...
DeleteI am in absolute awe... 'yup' that's all I can offer.
ReplyDeletebe hard put to choose a fav line. all are so lovely. wonderful image of love's salvation
ReplyDeleteWell done! I love it!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful metamorphosis.
ReplyDeleteI love it. Felt like I was there when I was reading this.
ReplyDeleteThis just cascades..I felt part of the wave, Picasso very apt!
ReplyDeletecool nice love his reading of it gives time for it to sink in daydream abit about the meanings and implications - it was a pleasure spending time with your poems again
ReplyDeleteVery alchemical, Tess! Bette Midler would be proud !
ReplyDeleteYou let me see romance in a whole new way.
ReplyDeleteExotic - a buffet of words for the reader to savor with a bit of salt
ReplyDeleteOh, those last two lines...
ReplyDelete(Well, all of them, actually.)
;)
What a wonderful rescue!
ReplyDeleteTo be sure. Only the sirens could save her now. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThis is true-blue Tess brilliance. Your voice is so strong in this poem, and I enjoy it so much, that I am going to listen to R.A.D.'s reading later on.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds lke true love to me! Lovely!
ReplyDelete..."turn me into a bouquet of roses"....what a beautiful thought there!!
ReplyDeleteSo good! Deserving of repeated readings. 😺
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery . . . and I love the reading!
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteVery nice Tess! I really like your choice of words...
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