I save the red nostalgic kiss.
After the longest moment of silence,
press the petals to my lips.
I have kept the faith, knowing I would love
and be loved, intimately
remember how November lies,
cenotaph on the other side of the Atlantic.
I am like a ghost who signals,
hears the same blood-beat in my ear;
chance shrapnel delivers
the opiate churning up of earth.
This late-flowering lust.
This late-flowering lust.
tk/November 2014
Excellent read by R.A.D. Stainforth...love the rare smile...
Excellent read by R.A.D. Stainforth...love the rare smile...
stunning Tess..x
ReplyDeleteExcellent interpretation and reading.
ReplyDeleteYou are a linguistic wizard. Pure word magic!
ReplyDeleteWhat a saucy ending! Love this part: "chance shrapnel delivers
ReplyDeletethe opiate churning"
beautiful composition Tess.
ReplyDeleteWhat a death it was ....
ReplyDeleteAh, the blood-beat that we all know. Fine writing...
ReplyDeleteThe aftermath of war situations death generally follows. Great word craft Tess!
ReplyDeleteHank
A hint of lust shimmers under November skies you've profoundly painted between the lines where November lies. Stunning!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed
ReplyDeleteclassic poem -touching imagery
ReplyDeleteOh the force of love and passion stirred up at the wake of war. This is lovely Tess.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant.
ReplyDeleteDuring wars people still fall in love. Wonderful Tess! Hugs!
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DeleteAh,so nostalgic...
ReplyDeleteGorgeous...your writing is so lush.
ReplyDeleteYour works are always so fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming by Tess...I like your evocative take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteNice; remembrance, it's what makes us uniquely human.
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