Think past stones―
to rivers, folded passages,
fade
the loud vacancy
to
a dream of heat and softness.
Press
a warm one to your face,
inhale
until you know
the
way cotton smells
mixed
with rain-soaked hair.
Each
hushed and stacked,
ready
to be grabbed,
wrapped
at the drop of a wet hat,
or
step from a morning bath ―
catch
wild domestic drips
from
a common kitchen sink.
tk/April 2013
Thanks to the talented R.A.D. Stainforth for reading this poem.
Woman With a Towel, 1898, Edgar Degas |
Does Mr Stainforth always recite in the bathroom?
ReplyDelete... necessary ritual?
Deleteah the luxury of a warm soft towel....simply lovely Tess!
ReplyDeleteNow I feel like I need to go take a bath. :-)
ReplyDeleteThere is nothing quite like the warmth and smell of a soft towel ... beautiful study of comfort, Tess.
ReplyDeleteCotton towels dried in the out of doors, none of those fake smell dryer sheets ...
ReplyDeleteVery Nice..fav lines
ReplyDeletePress a warm one to your face,
inhale until you know
A perfect moment.
ReplyDeleteCreative and perceptive, both.
ReplyDeleteI just love the lines:
ReplyDeleteinhale until you know
the way cotton smells
mixed with rain-soaked hair.
Wonderful and so lyrical!
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SueAnn
Ahhh...I need a baaath
ReplyDeleteand a loofaaaahhhh
Great towel description! and I really like the last two lines.
ReplyDeleteThe variations of drying. I'm not so kind to my towels!!
ReplyDeletecool juxtapositions - really love hearing your poems being read thanks
ReplyDeleteI love the way cotton smells and now I want to take a bath! A poem to meet the expectations of the painting.
ReplyDeleteIn my next life , i want to be this towel !
ReplyDeletewild domestic drips...smiles..ha. i like that...and the way cotton smells stanza was so evocative tess...i like much
ReplyDeletethis really is lovely.
ReplyDeleteLove that title....!!
ReplyDeleteI am truly how that painting has taken us venturing into new paths...
paint me in many hues, not just black
You make towels so sensual, Tess! I love the smell and feel of a warm, fresh towel pressed into my face! You captured it perfectly!
ReplyDeleteI feel as if I'm wrapped in this lovely poem...excellent!
ReplyDeleteGreat. I found this very sensuous.
ReplyDeleteThis was amazing loved the reading =)
ReplyDeleteI wish this was a scratch `n sniff poem!
ReplyDeleteWhat a tour de force...your poetry is gorgeous, sublime, like a massage today.
ReplyDeleteThis poem keeps flashing me back and forth between the bathroom and the bedroom. However do you manage to write on two levels so effortlessly?
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Thank you Sue...
Deletesensuous ... you are a brilliant writer. :)
ReplyDeleteI love always and most about poetry the way words magically mean so many seemingly unconnected - what: people, places, things, stories, ideas... that often come from our subconscious or who knows where; thrilling. This poem is a perfect example. I read it first as sensual, based on the painting, but saw the model as pregnant so did a little research,took so long reading about Degas I gave up and came back to comment.Found nothing to support my theory but much to highlight the levels of meaning in the poem, and to remind me how much I have always enjoyed your teasing way Tess.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ann, that means so much to me...I try to write so readers can connect on various levels...
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Oh the importance of a well presented towel. Nothing says "welcome" like a warm, fluffy, cotton towel. It is hard to find a quality towel... you should do a post as to where you get yours... I'm sure you know where the best ones can be found!
ReplyDeleteI like the juxtaposition between the last two lines.
ReplyDelete"fade the loud vacancy," ah willow. Tess, I mean! Yet I love willow the name (and the tree as well). Fade the loud vacancy. Fate? Fade. Fade the loud vacancy.
ReplyDeleteYou know what, I bet there isn't a single poem of yours that I've seen that didn't contain at least one (1) line I could shake free, pluck from its well-nestled context and run with, willy nilly non sequitur, a stolen plump plum of a poem prompt. I mean, this poem has three! At least.
I guess what I'm saying is, your excellence must get pretty irksome to anyone with a competitive bent, who is a poet. Luckily of course, it's not an issue - most poets have a better mindset than that.
Lucky.
Good to see you, Dogimo...and thank you...you just made my day...
DeletePerfectly paired with the passage with some really great imagery and some stunning language.
ReplyDeleteI love
catch wild domestic drips
from a common kitchen sink.
Ahh the sensuality of a warm fluffy bath towel. Wonderful Tess!
ReplyDeleteI read through "Unpressed" yesterday . . several more than once. I was struck by the sensuality . . some even erotic . . in nearly all of them. Love them, love you, poet!
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