from
flat cocoons,
in
early evening sinks slow
behind
the exhale of passing cars.
I
cradle you in crossed arms,
twilight
sheets―
starlings
nest in the loft,
your
hair smells grassy, like tea―
I
drink dandelion portions.
Love
grows like children,
steady,
unnoticed in winter―
then bursts
at the seams.
Suddenly
we've outgrown
all
of last year's spring.
I love the part about her hair smelling like tea. Love it!
ReplyDeleteLove and lust are always best conceived by the breath of spring.
ReplyDeleteOutgrown last years spring ! yup ! thanks Tess, I like this poem!
ReplyDeleteYeah, TOTALLY... the "your hair smells grassy, like tea" is one of the best lines ever. Man, I'm THERE, totally. Great image. (or great "smell"?)
ReplyDeletefantastic piece as always. Brilliant and profound conclusion. thank you!
Thank you AJ...that line came to me after a long inhale of PG Tips...
Deletenew lines.. love it!..
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
I cradle you in crossed arms,
ReplyDeletetwilight sheets―
Loved that!!
patterns don't free us
The fragrance of hair - that resonates. One of my memories too
ReplyDeleteSpring is re-energizing.. and summer is within reach. This reads to me like a welcome, but perhaps the first time the couple realizes they aren't "young' anymore. I could be way off...
ReplyDeleteOf course, it is beautiful, either way. I enjoyed your second Chapbook... two grace my poetry shelf now :)
Thanks for your kind support Margaret...fun to think of my books on your shelf...
Deletethe reading by R.A.D gives a completely different feel to these words, somewhat changing my original comment thoughts...
ReplyDeleteNicely penned!
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SueAnn
"Love grows like children,
ReplyDeletesteady, unnoticed in winter―
bursts at the seams." - this is magical !!!
beautiful lines....so close to nature..loved it....
ReplyDeleteRefreshing ode to that first warm day. It gives us a much needed breath of fresh air. And I love the smell of hair after being out in the fresh spring air. Wish they could bottle that scent.
ReplyDeleteGreat painting by Petrov-Vodin. Love the hat's red pop of color.
Happy Spring!
Beautiful interpretation of the pic.
ReplyDeletegreat lots of cool images and flow
ReplyDeleteohhh i love the cradled in crossed arms...felt that totally..x
ReplyDeleteso very in the moment and sensual.
ReplyDeleteWhat R.A.D. does for your words is extraordinary. He makes that last couplet zing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Maureen ... if you listen again you can hear me get it wrong ...
DeleteStainforth extraordinaire...he coaxes my words to life...
DeleteThis is beautiful, Tess:
ReplyDelete"I cradle you in crossed arms,
twilight sheets"
Love how R.A.D. almost whispers your lovely poem ... until close to the end. Also caught that extra word (then) he inserted.
ReplyDeletePlease send spring out my way?
Thanks Helen ... an epic failure to stick to the text ... Tess will be incandescent with rage ...
DeleteOh I'm incandescent alright...
Delete... positively glowing!!
Deletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteand RAD just breathes magic into every damn thing, doesn't he?
Thank you Rene ... gotta love Tess's goddamn poems ...
DeleteI love the 'snapshot' feel of this poem ... your images click, click, click ...
ReplyDeleteThat painting brings out the ENVY in me.
ReplyDeleteLove grows like children,
ReplyDeleteA fine lead in to the two brilliant final stanzas.
"I drink dandelion portions.
ReplyDeleteLove grows like children,"
well said and how quickly we outgrow, fast pace it is!!
I love the smell of grassy hair.
ReplyDeleteFeels like real love to me..cradled in crossed arms..yes, to that!
ReplyDeleteI just love your closing:
ReplyDeleteSuddenly we've outgrown
all of last year's spring.
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Are those dandelion portions sold by little girls with a dandelion portion stand with cups sold at $.05 per portion?
ReplyDeleteDandelion tea stand...
DeleteThinks:- would potions be easier to swallow than portions? :)
ReplyDeleteAnd the wheel keeps goin ' round !
ReplyDeleteIt’s exactly what I was looking nice job for posting this.Thanks lot for this useful article, nice post
ReplyDeleteI can't even pick a single line I like best because they are all so exquisitely beautiful, you are so talented!
ReplyDeletewhat a beautiful sentiment - to outgrow a season.
ReplyDeleteYour hair smells grassy, like tea- my sense come alive to this! For me, where I live, I have totally outgrown winter! Yikes- more snow rain and rain and snow tomorrow and the next day!
ReplyDeleteTess,
ReplyDeleteFantastic imagery in this. Puts me right there! BTW, where can I buy some of those "twilight sheets?" They sound great!
"Love grows like children,
ReplyDeletesteady, unnoticed in winter―
bursts at the seams."
These are beautiful lines. In their spirit, I interpret the last line about "outgrowing spring" in a positive light. :-)
I like this piece, especially the line: love grows like children.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful piece and so wonderfully recited! I liked it!
ReplyDeleteTess you captured the feeling so well
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ReplyDeleteamazingly warm and soft
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