R.A.D. Stainforth moistens dry words on the page...
I am the last
walk
with you,
watch
gulls hover,
cry
sharp in habitual air.
Fingers
in my hair,
you
crown me
lover
of the end ―
all
previous castles
now
wave-washed clean.
Already
grown full,
there
is nowhere else to grow,
but
with you ―
legs
stretch out,
like
pink-colored wings,
rearrange
the passage
between.
tk/November 2012
Squall, 1986, by Andrew Wyeth |
This is a beautiful ode to savoring life with another.....
ReplyDeleteTo be completely captivated by another person is something very few people experience ...
Delete... for the best is yet to come. Happy Thanksgiving, Tess.
ReplyDeleteLoved your words with the painting...
ReplyDeleteHappy Thanksgiving.
ReplyDeletethis is wonderful Tess, I was totally captivated from the first line..x
ReplyDeleteVery sensual. Lovely imagery. Sharing life like this, heaven.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely, tess.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully as one there.
ReplyDeleteLove it
ReplyDeleteAn ode to empty nest
Not so newlyweds
light as air and deep as the sea, your poem Tess.
ReplyDeleteLovely words, sensual and gentle.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful ... I loved the sound of passion in this piece !!!
ReplyDeletewondefully written- I love this walk with love.
ReplyDeleteFearlessly desolate.
ReplyDeleteSo this is what love's all about!! My, my...leave it to you!
ReplyDeleteFingers in my hair,
ReplyDeleteyou crown me
lover of the end
To me this speaks of the end of a love affair. This last moment to be shared with melancholy.
The end ... of being in love ... the ultimate love ...
DeleteWhat perfect harmony, words and image!
ReplyDeleteCarpe diem,
Merisi
This would be a perfect poem for you to place on the final page of a poetry book. If you want to know why, it would be because it leaves the reader with all of the feelings expressed in all of the comments preceding mine........ yet still the reader would be thirsty for more. Brilliant Tess! Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteall previous castles
ReplyDeletenow wave-washed clean
A powerful image of reminiscence
Slain again by your brilliance.
ReplyDeleteI hope to survive lover of moments and arrive here in this poignant place.
ReplyDeleteLovely lovely poem, Tess.
I must have missed something - where is R A D?
He's coming...just running a little late this week...
DeleteI'm coming ...
DeleteHe's finally here!
DeleteYour poem is lovely Tess, but I have sort of grown accustomed to my refined weekly reading pleasure - a luxury in today's hurried world:-)
Delete*chills down my spine*
Delete"All previous castles, now wave washed clean"! that made me smile, thanks-
ReplyDeleteWow, this really struck me. Like when I enter a death scene. I always check the head for injury and my fingers are probably the last to run through the hair of a decedent. I know it sound cold and calculating, but it strikes my core every time. I see the beauty in dismal death that nobody else gets. Thank you for this poem. I know nothing of poetry, but yours gets to me in a good way.
ReplyDeleteYour comment sent tingles through me...thank you...
DeleteThis awakes my slumbering poetic-appreciation side. Thanks.
ReplyDeletenowhere else to grow but with you - that is so lovely...
ReplyDeleteLovely words.
ReplyDeleteI love the grown together, mature but still passionate love this describes. Pray for passion!
ReplyDeleteI'm trying to decide whether I like "Already grown tall" (written) or "Already grown full" (spoken) better. Tall sort of brings to mind the age of the speaker, as if they've reached adulthood. Full brings to mind a woman that's just been ravished on the sand...
ReplyDeleteYou just helped me decide...
DeleteMy mistake ... I don't know why I said "full" ...
DeleteA most lovely mistake...
DeleteIt was magic, R.A.D. - don't fight the magic.
DeleteWow... it does make a difference. Full is exquisite!
DeleteI was just reading it yet again and incorrectly said the word "passion" in the last line. Hmmmmm.
ReplyDeleteI like already grown "full," too. It means so much more, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteAnd this poem is both elegant and powerful.
=)
Pure genius....
ReplyDelete"All previous castles now wave-washed clean".....just love every line of this Tess!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I love this: "Fingers in my hair, you crown me"
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Wow! This is stupendous!
ReplyDeleteTis a chemical wedding most elegant !
ReplyDeleteA most poignant read... it's like a long sigh.
ReplyDeleteElastic, yet holding. Lovely. Happy Thanksgiving.
ReplyDeleteLove it, too!....and RAD!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helena ...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, Tess! Happy Thanksgiving!!
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteThis sends shivers down my spine. Truly.
And so evocatively erotic.
I love it :)