From a distance,
the pattern looks right.
Buckles go unnoticed;
rough edges smoothed over
with a Libra trowel.
Hate puzzles.
I take it apart, spread it,
shameless, for a good hard look;
see all sorts of things.
Slowly it comes together;
gaps stare expectant
in the scene like clouds.
Then you.
End pieces tumble easy, snap,
fully interlock promises
and now.
and now.
tk/November 2014
Ronaldo Stainforth steps out of his black and white world...
spot on Tess! Have a great Sunday!
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It looks like confusion of visuals but your take brings some semblance of order. Wonderful write Tess!
Hank
The things we see when we really look... Sometimes wonderful, other times devastating...
ReplyDeleteVery meaningful.
ReplyDeleteLove this esp "fully interlock promises". Really promising :)
Clean Bowled
I love the progression of the relationship in this, the smooth parts and staccato beats.
ReplyDeleteLove how you personalized a geometric term ~ and used your birth sign too!!
ReplyDeleteWhat I've thought all along - life IS a jigsaw puzzle...
ReplyDeleteadore the interlocking promises... and beautifully read by Ronaldo!!
ReplyDeleteIf only we could all be taken apart and put back together in the right order.
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ReplyDeleteit's the Tess Cube
it works out ok eventually
Sometimes those puzzles take time as we ponder the pieces and let them fall together.
ReplyDeleteColor, how perfect, and with this Black and White themed photo. My thoughts are bent so deep in this write of yours today! Bravo.
ReplyDeleteThis is love. I know it. I recognize the pattern, Tess. Bravo, madam.
ReplyDeleteLike the tessellation with now...expressive read!
ReplyDeleteYour poem is full of surprises and an excellent take on the existential flurry of antagonistic emotions.The now I presume is irresolutey left open by choice ?
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