self-portrait, Francis Bacon |
You step into the room, see yourself
look up from somewhere distant.
Your eyes reflect a safe interior,
without the anxiety of an unwanted stare.
Windows open to new air.
You stand unadorned
apart from the self-scorn
you wear around your neck.
Here is a place with no mirrors, no squinting,
thrust against the space between you.
Stretch out your arm, capture a forever moment
of the skin genuine, sweat-soaked and intimate.
tk/December 2013
Last month the word "selfie" was announced by the Oxford English Dictionary as "word of the year".
R.A.D. Stainforth's lovely bewhiskered read:
R.A.D. Stainforth's lovely bewhiskered read:
Nice to have a such place~ cozy 'bewhiskered read' :)
ReplyDelete"You stand unadorned
ReplyDeleteapart from the self-scorn
you wear around your neck."
Genius you!
Love the poem, interesting selfie (even though, I have been told, in a true selfie, your face is not covered). ;-)
Great minds think alike Tess! Lol! I had the same idea only different perspective. What I love most about poetry and prompts-all the takes!! Happy New Year back to you! Looking forward to more great prompts and fun in the NY!
ReplyDeleteYou stand unadorned..this line really speaks volumes as you look
ReplyDeleteat the simplicity of the man in his environment..enjoyed your take.
Happy New Year!
I didn't know it was a selfie when I wrote my poem. I love what you've done with this - my favorite line is
ReplyDelete>> You stand unadorned
>> apart from the self scorn
>> you wear around your neck
(I suppose many of us can relate to this... some more than others!)
powerful reading. my first attempt at one of your prompts, thank you for the inspiration ~ M
ReplyDeleteamazing evolution of the spoken word....who would have ever imagined that "google" would become a
ReplyDeleteverb?? And now we have "selfie"? hah! Love your poem with this image!
I'm a self-scorn admirer, as well! Wonderful words. Gee, I sure missed RAD's voice too!
ReplyDeletecapture a forever moment
ReplyDeleteof the skin genuine,
sweat-soaked and intimate
Perfect description of the capture of a self portrait. Great write Tess. Thanks for all of the 2013 choices. Happy New Year to you Ma'am!
Hank
Tess this was great .. wonderful written words, so well read by RAD. Just great!
ReplyDeleteBacon was all "Selfie", wasn't he..you captured more than a moment! Skin genuine..oh, my...Best to you for all you do!!
ReplyDeleteWell done Tess. I enjoyed the clever use of this picture prompt. Looking forward to your 2014 prompts.
ReplyDeleteYou stand unadorned
ReplyDeleteapart from the self-scorn
you wear around your neck.
If only all self portraits were this simple...
Amazing the new words that make their way into our vocabulary. I am sooo out of the loop! A lovely capture Tess, I enjoyed reading this. Happy new year to you!
ReplyDeleteNot as easy as one would think ... looking into that mirror. Great poem, Tess. Happy New Year!!
ReplyDeleteLove the first two lines--and the rest!
ReplyDeleteI think taking selfies is an art form. :) You captured it with your words. Best wishes for the new year.
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear readers, for your kind and generous comments...Happy 2014!
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