Danseuse ajustant sa bretelle, 1895-96, Edgar Degas |
It develops in the bath;
smears mirror steam,
births metallic
in crumpled waves
of toothpaste tube.
I watch it thrash;
to cling to others,
push them under
and climb on top
in order to be rescued.
It does not drown;
settles under gelatin lids,
struggles to evaporate
before the fixer
dodges and burns.
tk/November 2013
'it' is rather intriguing ...
ReplyDeleteBirth is hard an any medium. Not fading away is even harder. The moment here between those is such a ghostly dance ... Fine stuff!
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ReplyDeleteSeductive taming...;)
ReplyDeleteYou give her both the tenacity and evanescent grace of great dancers. (Plus, the crumpled toothpaste tube is brilliant with the image!)
ReplyDeletethe artful fixer…the struggle to appear, to be, always so difficult. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteWOW! A very different perspective.
ReplyDeleteAnd so another picture develops...
ReplyDeleteI used to develope photos and never thought of this. I like the steamed mirror reference! I had trouble with my Blogger site and seeing your site yesterday Tess but it looks like Google fixed it. I really enjoy writing with your group I used to write with your group some years back and am happy to see many people still here! I wasn't on G+ then but glad to be back!
ReplyDeleteYour words, as usual, so hauntingly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteHmmm...so many things develop in the bath. An intreguing write.
ReplyDeleteI have friends who develop their own black and white negatives ... in their bathrooms. Fascinating poem revolving around the 'process.'
ReplyDeletethis takes me back to my darkroom days- I do miss the magic of developing and printing-
ReplyDeleteLovely words Tess!
This focus on process works well on many levels. Well done, as always.
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nice one Tess....I had trouble linking up now
ReplyDeleteUnique, Tess. I love 'births metallic"
ReplyDeleteBrushing my teeth has never been so metaphysical !
ReplyDeleteIt's essence, rises......
ReplyDeleteWow … I love this one
ReplyDelete… great read too.
Thank you for your kind comments, dear friends...
ReplyDeletevery well written and described... love it!
ReplyDeleteI used to develop film in the bathroom--your imagery caught that experience beautifully.
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