le Jardin, 1962, by Max Ernst |
Hold me as close to your fantasies as I will ever come.
Wave a magic wand
over forgotten fastenings;
wake me from the hollow tree.
How big is a halo, a button, a zipper pull?
Your eyes flash parable blue,
pan with anticipation,
tighten to close-ups of hands and feet.
Nothing is lost on the cutting room floor;
whisper a sweet amen at the end.
Remember this holy travelogue,
so it can be told over again,
without pillars of cloud.
Expose my gothic wings.
exquisite poetry Tess! and belated Happy Birthday greetings!
ReplyDeleteNothing is lost on the cutting room floor.
ReplyDeleteExcept in the painting itself, eh?
Has to be one of my all time favorites!
ReplyDeleteFull of beautiful surprises..lovely..don't lose those Gothic wings!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful images waiting to take flight
ReplyDelete"parable blue" is lovely...and somehow reorienting the image gives her a much more active, expectant (and messy-bedclothed) look.
ReplyDeleteSings. It just sings!
ReplyDeleteNothing is lost on the cutting room floor
ReplyDeleteThat's right, it takes a cutter's skill to ensure this. Great write Tess!
Hank
Hank
Its quite melodious, perhaps a nascent song ?, i lived it , yes lived
ReplyDeleteSuch a flowing poem!
ReplyDeleteerosion
Magical...
ReplyDeleteTruly beautiful Tess!
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ReplyDeleteBy the time I get here it's all been said but very enjoyable, like lyrics to a song Tess!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]