Before you are born,
I paint your half smile.
I see a schoolboy tie;
your sensitive hands touch
an open book.
Your voice floats high
above playground noise,
the sound of scissors.
I hover restless, long,
until your hair is no longer the color
of pencil shavings,
until you speak the low
calm of a red rose.
tk/ September 2013
Thanks to R.A.D. Stainforth for beautifully reading this poem.
beyond beautiful, this poem - to be savoured again and again
ReplyDeletejust adore this, esp the colours of pencil shavings..plus Norman Rockwell is one of my favorite illustrators, even visited his museum when i holidayed in the states a few years back.xx.
ReplyDeleteThere are two resident Norman Rockwell pieces at my dear Columbus Museum of Art...I am always amazed at how thickly and roughly he applied the paint...
DeleteBeautiful poem...I am touched by it..
ReplyDeletereading the menu in the clouds outside
Floating, hovering and dreamlike - lovely.
ReplyDeleteEloquent and quite moving...
ReplyDeleteLovely poem .. loved the tenderness in the tone.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem .. loved the tenderness in the tone.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThe picture sent me in a literal,historic direction, partly because of a PBS documentary.
ReplyDeleteah, perfect, color & sound
Pencil shaving hair does it for me...
ReplyDeleteSuch a delight, Tess. I have yet to write my own poem this morning - and oh, you fill me with surprises in yours which inspires me to surprises. Absolutely gorgeous. THANK YOU!!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Julie...
DeleteSo I read your poem and wound up with another one today, besides the one I posted, coming off your first line and the idea of trains. Thanks for that.
ReplyDeleteLove to be of inspiration, Chris...
DeleteSo tender, so sweet!
ReplyDeleteExpected nothing less,
Tess
So tender, so sweet!
ReplyDeleteExpected nothing less,
Tess
very nice Tess...thanks
ReplyDeleteThose months before our sons, daughters are born ~~~ oh, the dreams we have of them, for them.
ReplyDeletePrescient .....
ReplyDeletegreat ending really enjoyed it
ReplyDeleteso tender and sweet those pencil shavings....
ReplyDeleteTess, this poem is so beautiful. Thank you, I love it!
ReplyDeleteI thought I responded to this ... perhaps it was on Facebook. This leaves no doubt you are a mother. I adore this poem. I don't necessarily get the last line... how it ties in. Perhaps your son recently sent you some?
ReplyDeleteI like how readers take away different things from poetry...I didn't write this with a mother/son perspective in mind...
DeleteA truly lovely poem, Tess. I liked your view on this.
ReplyDeleteI instantly thought of a song by Mott the Hoople with these lines. (Thanks Mott)
ReplyDeleteOh I wish I was your mother
I wish I'd been your father
'n then I would have seen you
Would have been you as a child
Played houses with your sisters
And wrestled with all your brothers
And then who knows
I might have felt a family for a while
Whoa, that was rather haunting. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...heartfelt...waiting for the day.
ReplyDeleteHow much we dream for our unborn children and then, until reality comes, during their formative years . . . or was that just me??
ReplyDeleteI like the way you went with this. I thought of a mother/child as well.
ReplyDeleteWow....I am usually unable to listen to RAD.....but today I was able and what a delight that was! He almost brings it even more to life than it already is.....I love love love this one Tess!
ReplyDeleteExquisite vision...
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