I see your head poke
from a cloud of leaves;
your sap-stained legs dangle
beneath a limb.
Some days you climb further,
to the high branches,
frighten sparrows
from their narrow perches.
In winter you are easily seen
carving graffiti into the bark
with your laser eyes;
four initials and a heart.
I am content to swing low,
absolve myself with hemp,
twist tight, let go,
lose control.
tk/August 2013
Thank you, R.A.D. Stainforth, for this beautiful read.
Jeanie Tomenek |
Another gorgeous poem, Tess. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteSparrows on narrow perches, beware! :)
ReplyDeleteRaptly holding; beautiful...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Tess. Love this image.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like getting high on something nice, a beautiful piece.
ReplyDeletegorgeous.....x
ReplyDelete...someday, all things that climb high & almost unreacheable will come down to kiss the ground for once... dreams & souls may be burried in the air but our flesh & bones always belong to the earth where we loaned it... smiles... loved this!
ReplyDeleterather dreamy and high..........smiles!
ReplyDeleteTess, in full swing...
ReplyDeleteOoh, love that last stanza especially! Twisted, sister. ;-)
ReplyDeleteDreamy and full of rhythm. :-)
ReplyDeleteLove those laser eyes...:)
ReplyDeleteLovely poetry, Tess. One day ~~ will you gift us with a video of you reading the poem ... Mr. Stainforth, it would be a one time thing - promise.
ReplyDeleteI kept thinking of a bat! But I do like the idea of satisfying oneself with hemp. ;^/
ReplyDeleteLove that art work!! And the poetry - thanks for sharing!!
ReplyDeleteIt's a wonderful poem!
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ReplyDeleteI always use Ada's initials when I feel the urge to carve a heart or two...!
ReplyDeleteAh yes, to swing low with sweetness.
ReplyDeleteTrapeze artist par excellence, good on you , Tess
ReplyDeleteGorgeous work, Tess.
ReplyDeleteThis is a fun poem. Made me think of a woodpecker, carving in the tree.
ReplyDeleteI remember twisting the swing tight and letting it go. It would unwind so fast it made me dizzy. Swinging is such a feeling of freedom...almost like flying.
NOW I SEE why you wrote (to me) "Jump! Jump down now!"
ReplyDeleteI just SO "like it all" Tess.
Thank you!
...."Sparrows from their narrow perches"....Really like how this progresses!
ReplyDeleteLovely, nicely done...
ReplyDeleteI see Tarzan and Jane while I swing from my memories.
ReplyDeleteWho would I rather be, the one climbing high or the one below? I know which one I am . . .
ReplyDeleteI love your poem, Tess, it's beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteI too am content to swing low if, by so doing, I can get to read your poems again, and again, and again.
ReplyDeleteSplendid. Loved these lines :
ReplyDelete"In winter you are easily seen
carving graffiti into the bark
with your laser eyes;
four initials and a heart."
Truly beautiful.
I just knew it! (LOL?)
ReplyDeleteI love the sap-stained legs, laser eyes and "absolving myself with hemp" (hmmm). So beautifully done, Tess. One could do worse than swing low from branches, so to speak, eh? Thank you.
ReplyDeleteSome days we all need to climb higher.
ReplyDeletesome really good lines here Tess...thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteSounds like a good trip:)
ReplyDeleteThe beautiful climb of life....love this Tess!
ReplyDeleteA stunning first stanza, with much beauty to follow.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful images. :-)
ReplyDeleteYour kind and generous comments mean so very much to me, dear friends...
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely lovely and so very well read.. I really enjoyed this Tess!
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