I dreamed
he was my father;
that I came
from hard water
tucked in his timeline
between New York
and Hollywood,
a summer
of root crops
and soy beans,
wild oats sown
in a Hoosier farm girl.
I craved a king,
some kind of Ramses
from heaven,
to strut clean,
make good the role.
Maybe I understood
the Mongol,
the far-off Tartar,
as not so magnificent
a number as seven.
tk/January 2012
Listen to R.A.D. Stainforth read this poem:
Image: Lee Friedlander
that's a fine tribute. my favorite was the king of siam, with ramses a close 2nd
ReplyDeleteOh, it would never do to have Yummy Yul as my daddy... there are laws against that sort of thing! *wink*
ReplyDeleteNice work! Oh my gosh, I love this new reader that you have! His voice is amazing a makes your poems pop! I also like it when you read as well! :)
ReplyDelete'that i came from hard water tucked in his timeline'....stunning line,xx
ReplyDeleteVery well done.
ReplyDeleteExcellent words and great meaning.
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot, especially how you've woven the cultural references with the mythic, built a story from so few words. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteTess,
ReplyDeleteAs King Mongkut and RamesesII he exuded a regal bearing. As Chris the Magnificent he could maintain the same aura even in cowboy garb. Such was he an actor! Great verse!
Hank
A wonderful tribute Tess.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Nicely captured a conjunction in space and time that, although slipped into the stream of the past, is rapidly returned by your verse.
ReplyDeleteoo la la nicely written tess...love the city back drop in the pic...and very nice blend you put in there of culture and fantasy
ReplyDeleteOne of Friedlander's best photographs ... packed like your poem is with images ...
ReplyDeleteMs. Geek, Stainforth's voice is amazing. He delivers my poetry on a silver platter!
ReplyDeleteR.A.D. delivers per usual,
ReplyDeleteof course it is lovely to hear
him tackle "Hoosier" with an
extra syllable dangling; reminds
us that a half a planet apart,
there are still things to share.
Really, this is a naughty tribute
for you still worked in some
randy and lusty images that
only a stepdaughter could get
away with. I have to find out
the derivation of "Jules" yet.
I love the wonder in this, the ray of hope the girl gets from imagining it as her father.
ReplyDeleteHow odd. I wrote the same poem in my way without seeing yours.
ReplyDeleteQuite the paean to Mr.Brynner. I like the distance you stress between king/magnificent and common/hoosier farm girl
ReplyDeleteWhat a great take on that picture!
ReplyDeleteGlenn, I rather like Stainforth's charming pronunciation of Hoosier. There's nothing dangling about it, in the least. I'm not a stepdaughter, by the way.
ReplyDeleteThis is incredible, Tess! I love "that I came from hard water" and "wild oats sown in a Hoosier farm girl."
ReplyDelete~Shawna
(rosemarymint.wordpress.com)
Marvellous Tess.
ReplyDeleteAnd I saw him in the London run with Deborah Kerr.
Thank you for the prompt I had fun with this one...and I realy liked your poem.
ReplyDeleteSuperb.
ReplyDeleteGoodness, the stepdaughter mention
ReplyDeleterefers to the lady of the verse, finding
such attraction for the king, and
I certainly would never make a
derogatory comment about the
R.A.D. narrations, the pronunciation
just tickled me is all.
All so interesting. k.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Tess.I loved this.(Actually, my first thought was "Damn, girl. That's good stuff!" but that sounded glib, so I started to revise it, but it was a true response.)
ReplyDeleteOh yes. He was such a powerful actor. The first person (I think) I knew of to have a shaven head.
ReplyDeletei do love the Friedlander photos you have been using. Yes, the dream of a farm girl's mom having a romance with someone like this. sort of Oz
ReplyDeletelike though I am getting that from my imagination.
i love the anything is possible feeling!
ReplyDeleteLove this...He was a commanding figure. Nice tribute to his work.
ReplyDeletelove this image- so much can be found in it- and your poem is divine!
ReplyDeleteYou always capture the spirit...
ReplyDeletedid u really dream he was your father? my dad and he were born in the same town, in the same time. my dad's cousin was best friends with his sister.
ReplyDeleteClever. Cerebral AND poetic!
ReplyDeleteZongrik, yes, I had a vivid dream in which my grandfather called the family together to tell me that Yul Brynner was my biological father...crazy...
ReplyDeleteBrilliant stuff Tess
ReplyDeleteLove this tribute to a favorite of mine. What a great shot too.
ReplyDeleteSo intriguing. I always learn here at Willow Manor.
ReplyDeleteGreat poetic tribute to a fine actor!
ReplyDeleteNicely done Tess
ReplyDeleteWhy is it that so many other Blog poets bore me after a time, but you never do? This is not a rhetorical question - I demand an answer (in verse, if possible)
ReplyDeleteExquisite.
ReplyDeleteAlan
ReplyDeleteIt gives a quiet
little thrill
to know I satisfy
you still
enough to draw
you back for quirk
and wordy craw
my friend.
A glorious tribute and write Tess!
ReplyDelete:-).....gotta love Yul! :-)
Dear Tess: Incredible magic you weave in this dream of Yul! Me too; yah he's hot tartar!
ReplyDeleteThe King would have been proud to call you offspring .....
ReplyDeletebrilliant
ReplyDeleteHe was a handsome man and that Russian bearing made him irresistible
ReplyDeletedreams of a hoosier girl
ReplyDeletewonderful, Tess
Stellar!
ReplyDeleteOh, Tess, this is truly wonderful!
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