Not much of a bungee-jumper,
I no longer fly free-form
but play a black orbit,
take a rain check on heights,
find myself a patron
in the daily grind
of coffee and the news.
Till one day, my muse
taps me on the shoulder,
says in a dyslexic whisper,
"Hey self, wake up!
It's dark and light together;
it's still morning, in the whole
scheme of things."
Now, suddenly, I'm a chess piece
that can go around corners,
a king who breaks free
of the one-step-at-a-time routine.
I find the game book on the shelf,
reread the facts of life,
then tell myself
I'm not afraid of falling.
Tess Kincaid
October, 2011
Listen to R.A.D. Stainforth's delightful reading of this poem:
image: Michael Sowa
It really is a balance isn't it...betwwen our reserved,responsable self and the fun loving us that hides deep down in us all...
ReplyDeletea beautiful write my friend :)
Nods in agreement!
ReplyDeleteAnd a splendid reading too!
Ball outfit chosen and posted! Butterfly's setting in!
Thank you Jeffery ... I think Tess Kincaid's poems benefit from being read aloud ...
ReplyDeleteYou're Welcome Roderick!
ReplyDeleteAll poetry has life, but give it breath and it has soul as well!
Cheers!
Ah, getting the balance between the two is the secret. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteWhat a treat Tess!
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful write, Tess. I love it. Your king has a better perspective than mine does. LoL
ReplyDeleteIt's the light that does it. Harsh, stark, desperate, and then the newspaper smile, as if it's perfect newspaper weather.
ReplyDeleteThis just blows me away. I love the idea of "dyslexic whisper" wow that embodies my writing life so much. Wonderful poem Tess. Before you know it Patina II will need to be published.
ReplyDeleteAnother lovely poem, Tess. I read your poetry aloud as I discover it, every time. I like the tumble of words in my mouth.
ReplyDeleteYou never disappoint, my dear. I always enjoy your poetry.
ReplyDeletesmiles. break free of expectations...dare yourself to live...lovely write tess
ReplyDeleteinspiring just what i needed to read
ReplyDeleteI love 'it's still morning, in the whole scheme of things' a wonderful thought, and a wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem...and a wonderful reading. I'm very excited about the ball...My dates (yes I said dates) are ready and willing, my chariot awaits, I've even rented a new body for the evening.
ReplyDeleteAs beautifully mysterious as ever, Tess.
ReplyDeleteYouth is only partially wasted
ReplyDeleteon the young, for when one of
us realizes that our /kings can
break free/, that new rules, fresh
perspective is out there lurking
beneath the clover, hiding its
face beneath discarded patina,
then time does a back flip and
we let loose the hounds of inner
child, and creativity flows, and feet
find the dance, flowers find the sun
during a break in the clouds. You
still lead the way, and we flounce
after you eagerly, gladly, gratefully--
and R.A.D. is bang on, your poetry
begs to be read aloud, and be lovingly
dissected and quoted on personal
pages, lines cut up and tossed in a
great baggy hat, to be pulled out one
at a time, like the delicacy they are.
Checkmate in the offing, perhaps? :)
ReplyDeleteI loved it when I got to the part about the chess piece who can go around corners!
ReplyDeleteI like the break away to freedom and new possibility you proffer in this piece Tess... Also, I would still enjoy hearing you read your poetry, to experience how your personal inflection would inform your work...
ReplyDeleteNicely put.
ReplyDeleteLike the picture. Am off on a holiday - will play with the image/idea when I return.
I've alway felt sorry for the King, supposedly the most powerful piece on the chessboard, but so horribly constrained. And so, I was glad to see that yours had broken free.
ReplyDeleteMy Magpie 86 entry is Cepheus.
I'm not afraid of falling either but the dancing shoes I've chosen for the ball are giving me cause for concern. Thank you for sharing your creativity so generously. Poems such as this need to be shared, spoken and smiled about. I too enjoyed the "dyslexic whisper" part. In my life those whispers mess me up whenever I put the car in reverse. Looking forward to Wednesday. It is Thanksgiving in Canada this weekend and I am very thankful for you, this blog Willow Manor and your inspiring words.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Linda...Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours, dear friend...
ReplyDeleteYou can't take that leap of faith if you're afraid of falling.
ReplyDeleteyou really rocked this prompt...or took a free fall right through the words, rather :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent write.
ReplyDeleteA knack for a balance of boisterous and reserved nicely done. Excellent verse, Tess!
ReplyDeleteHank
Fabulous, Tess! So far away from mine, you wouldn't suppose we looked at the same picture.
ReplyDeleteKay, Alberta, Canada
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Tess- You never cease to amaze me.
ReplyDeleteOutrageous -- as usual. And I mean, good. That painting is so beautiful, too -- what and who is it?
ReplyDeleteinspiring poetry as always..and thanks Tess for Magpie Tales.
ReplyDeleteLook at the community you have nutured! I just might fit into my dress on the 12th!
Does the King become a Queen?
ReplyDeleteTess, I've had some wonderful news. The New England Air Museum have agreed to allow Miss O'Hara's late husband's Sikorsky VS-44A (the Queen of the Skies) seaplane out for a few days. They will fly to Glengarriff in County Cork, pick up Ms O'Hara and myself, then deliver us to Willow Manor at aprox 9 pm on the 12th.
We can't wait!
After just calling this image "great inspiration" in my comments at Magpie Tales, I read your poem that is SO inspiring to me. Oh, how I love this one...and needed it, too.
ReplyDeleteAnd Stainforth's reading was wonderful.
Tess, I never read any of the Magpies before I post my own because I want to find my own piece in the prompt. However, this time I think we may have been channeing the same eddy of ether - that's surrealism for you.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem.
Isabel...eddy of ether...I love that...
ReplyDeletein my work with young children my main focus is to help them find the balance. better yet, to find out how to blend the two! lovely writing tess!!!! steven
ReplyDeleteDear Willow: "I'm not afraid of falling" Brave and Courageous your Little King within! Brilliant n sexy read R.A.D. Stainforth!
ReplyDeleteInteresting-No bungees for me either!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Relating to the dyslexic whisper that can haunt one at times....
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to let you know how much I love this blog! :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun piece... dare to venture those heights once in a while when the 'dyslexic whisper' lies stagnant on the page.
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteit is good to take the stage and the corners...
thank you. This is one where rereads bring in something new every time...
I like it
Speaking of balance (which you do beautifully) .. how are you able to write gems like this AND prepare the Manor for the ball!!!
ReplyDeletefalling's ok:you can always get back up. Wonderful, Tess!
ReplyDeleteYour foregrounding of the picture's dark background really struck me here.
ReplyDeleteI love the turnaround here, this unexpected freedom from limitations imposed by a lesser, more fearful self.
ReplyDeleteNow, suddenly, I'm a chess piece
that can go around corners,
a king who breaks free
of the one-step-at-a-time routine.
The muse as dyslexic whisperer - brilliant!
dark and light together
ReplyDeleteblack coffee in my cup
espresso kissing the night
kessing the dark
tessing the fragrance
light slips between the lips
cream between sips
swirls mocha in my cup
when the sip is up
the cup is tan
glass glass
or porcelain?
watch its mixing swirl
or end game alone
beautiful write
ReplyDeleteDelicately nuanced. One feels the apprehension, longing and leaning towards life.
ReplyDeleteI think your muse tapped me on the shoulder to....love this Tess!!
ReplyDeleteA free king is much to be desired. Lovely thoughts in this piece!
ReplyDeleteRe-read the 'book of life', Ahhhh! I do it often, sometimes alone, no book in my small sphere.
ReplyDeleteAnd your voice rings so clear and true.
I've no more, except to say: Thank You!
Steve E., actually, I say reread the "facts of life"...which might skew a slightly different meaning than your "book of life"...
ReplyDeleteAnonymous, you make me want a cup of thick black coffee...but it's too late for caffeine at this time of night...
ReplyDeleteAn interesting new format for you Tess. I like the king who breaks loose from one step at a time ...checkmate at every turn ..can't lose. This was a difficult prompt.
ReplyDeleteTess, I understood you completely. I even wrote that I read the book without a real book. I could have read the 'facts' on a sheet of "bathroom tissue" --ahem! But I put my facts in that 'book' in my head.
ReplyDeleteI would not try to change your meaning on purpose...it is your excellent presentations of thoughts which keep me coming here in admiration, and gratitude--for your talents.
Going away Thursday for a week...to Charleston SC. Visit with a blogger and her family and her Peeps!
Please God...
Bless
Tess!
PEACE!
Made me smile - big time!
ReplyDelete...looking for that damn book myself today....may I borrow yours, oh king?
ReplyDeletedelightful
I came here by chance and enjoyed a long, lingering look around. penny
ReplyDeletedo you really think general motors will revive the saturn? :O lol
ReplyDeleteHa...you silly!
ReplyDeletebonjour, love the long hair !! just wanted to let you know that when your
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that can't be good.
much love Susan & Gang
Oh I love this!!! Said while applying make up for the ball.
ReplyDeleteSusan, thanks for the heads up...I fixed that...
ReplyDeleteYes, we can rewrite the rules and liberate ourselves...
ReplyDeleteBrilliant and enjoyable!! In mine it was checkmate and game over for the Rajah's!!
ReplyDeleteJust spread your wings and fly, eh?
ReplyDeleteBrilliant!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
If we are afraid of heights I guess we can never reach them! Nicely written and bungee jumping? Not for me either!
ReplyDeleteOh, I really love this! A charming piece.
ReplyDeleteSo much of what we do or rather don't do is because of this awful fear of falling on our faces in the mud of life. And really it's better to be muddy than do nothing. Thankyou for such a sensitive insight into this daily dilemma
ReplyDeleteI loved the ending. I wish I could say the same to myself... :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
I like it. Here's to new adventures!
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