tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post5681849409608537696..comments2024-03-08T07:03:12.909-05:00Comments on Life at Willow Manor: kontrolTess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comBlogger88125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-91789787379685961762010-07-22T08:23:38.342-04:002010-07-22T08:23:38.342-04:00Heh-heh, I think I'll change it back!Heh-heh, I think I'll change it back!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-30414645240324112012010-07-22T00:51:23.293-04:002010-07-22T00:51:23.293-04:00Tell the truth, Willow.
When you wrote this poe...Tell the truth, Willow. <br /><br />When you wrote this poem the first time, that last stanza had the word "flaccid" instead of "placid".<br /><br />Didn't it?Marchelinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11201825708442679157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-88017478180249528032010-07-20T16:17:37.512-04:002010-07-20T16:17:37.512-04:00WHOA ! Brilliant wordplay!
Loved your style.. and ...WHOA ! Brilliant wordplay!<br />Loved your style.. and the apt description! An excellent tribute! <br />Thanks for sharing...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-72766219471918359302010-07-20T13:19:19.430-04:002010-07-20T13:19:19.430-04:00very vivid and abstract feelings.
love the fancine...very vivid and abstract feelings.<br />love the fanciness in your words.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-31863461832097743172010-07-20T08:53:04.946-04:002010-07-20T08:53:04.946-04:00a true classical piece and that last line...pricel...a true classical piece and that last line...priceless!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-64168542605624446122010-07-19T21:50:44.987-04:002010-07-19T21:50:44.987-04:00"...its soda-acid ejaculates,
like a horny so..."...its soda-acid ejaculates,<br />like a horny soldier on fire." Great line, Willow!http://howtobecomeacatladywithoutthecats.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02888838201074339916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-57345029449236384052010-07-19T19:31:17.447-04:002010-07-19T19:31:17.447-04:00Great poem. I love the line 'abandoned artille...Great poem. I love the line 'abandoned artillery shell'. That's just what they look like.Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-35979233858896324992010-07-19T03:21:21.663-04:002010-07-19T03:21:21.663-04:00I think you are by far, one of my fave, 'real&...I think you are by far, one of my fave, 'real' poets, you have a fantastic way of looking at things, capturing them and putting them down on paper. Are you involved with reading them or anything? I think your poems not only need to be shared on line but vocally as well. they slip great on the the tongue...you know Orson Scott Card? he has an online poetry mag I think you may like: www.strongverse.orgAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-770731699520075362010-07-19T01:06:41.126-04:002010-07-19T01:06:41.126-04:00You create magic with words. You weave with them a...You create magic with words. You weave with them and the final piece is always strong.Tattered and Losthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00208918251232477186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-20034150182580987762010-07-18T23:33:13.685-04:002010-07-18T23:33:13.685-04:00There's still life in the aged tool! Fun read!...There's still life in the aged tool! Fun read!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-7456027374197506322010-07-18T22:12:40.902-04:002010-07-18T22:12:40.902-04:00The last stanza's imagery was magnificent. Th...The last stanza's imagery was magnificent. The whole piece was great. Really enjoyed reading this one.Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-65724659050517247092010-07-18T18:15:36.249-04:002010-07-18T18:15:36.249-04:00This was definitely a new way to look at a fire ex...This was definitely a new way to look at a fire extinguisher. We have one we received as a wedding gift almost 20 years ago. I'll bet it doesn't work anymore - it has been placidly abstinent for quite some time now!The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-85874506995190491502010-07-18T13:23:37.703-04:002010-07-18T13:23:37.703-04:00I felt kinda sorry for the actual old forgotten cy...I felt kinda sorry for the actual old forgotten cylinder, too! Let's hear it for copper and brass..lolHelenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-5579984935678286612010-07-18T11:08:23.819-04:002010-07-18T11:08:23.819-04:00Dear Willow: Very serious poem! Willow you should ...Dear Willow: Very serious poem! Willow you should lighten up! (not light up! but then again, maybe this is not a bad thing, considering what it is that the old thing on the wall does to one. This photo prompt did indeed do the same thing for (or to) me! What is it about those old Fire extinguishers anyway? They should come with a warning label! I can see this; The curly mustacheo? The "cold copper" !Ohhhh!" a heated sigh. Yes men who can do that even now knew exactly what "romantic love" meant. The last line gave me a deep belly laugh and all-day giggles!Go boldly into that good Knight!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-31665519117538835082010-07-18T09:59:49.573-04:002010-07-18T09:59:49.573-04:00This was brilliant! I absolutely loved the metapho...This was brilliant! I absolutely loved the metaphors. :)RAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17922537526607315266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-50474458974451532392010-07-18T02:06:09.314-04:002010-07-18T02:06:09.314-04:00You have a clever mind, nice perspective on the ab...You have a clever mind, nice perspective on the abandoned fire extinguisher. Also, Great last line :)!Laniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00906818546969078020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-45850977183130865822010-07-17T23:55:32.569-04:002010-07-17T23:55:32.569-04:00you poetry is beautiful... i'm so glad to have...you poetry is beautiful... i'm so glad to have found you, through Talk at the Table.Mommy Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09989213786947802537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-15631870596662340372010-07-17T23:05:01.108-04:002010-07-17T23:05:01.108-04:00I'm loving this, Willow. Bravo!I'm loving this, Willow. Bravo!Angie Muresanhttp://www.angiemuresan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-68865549317209057392010-07-17T22:13:49.834-04:002010-07-17T22:13:49.834-04:00Willow---it seems as if you and I have been thinki...Willow---it seems as if you and I have been thinking along the same lines lately...steamy!! Really good, girl. Great minds think alike, right? Horny soldier, soda-acid ejaculates, bottom up in the bed lines. Wowzer!!!Terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13046623774704584939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-46972954272097806532010-07-17T21:36:56.815-04:002010-07-17T21:36:56.815-04:00yowza willow!!! even the lowly fire extinguisher g...yowza willow!!! even the lowly fire extinguisher gets the hot willow treatment!! wickedgood!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-49776057099793284472010-07-17T17:44:25.099-04:002010-07-17T17:44:25.099-04:00Wonderfully written! A great take on the prompt!
...Wonderfully written! A great take on the prompt!<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-46104341948535492692010-07-17T13:35:02.283-04:002010-07-17T13:35:02.283-04:00Instead of old extinguisher cooling me down, the l...Instead of old extinguisher cooling me down, the last line, well, sort of started a fire!!..<br /> Very clever, indeed...Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-81303590322024442272010-07-17T12:53:55.713-04:002010-07-17T12:53:55.713-04:00Ha ha! I will never look at a fire extinguisher in...Ha ha! I will never look at a fire extinguisher in the same way. Brilliant!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-156506602645248892010-07-17T12:09:11.293-04:002010-07-17T12:09:11.293-04:00Most excellent, Willow.Most excellent, Willow.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1636364949017025470.post-79376704756124833012010-07-17T11:24:50.208-04:002010-07-17T11:24:50.208-04:00hahaha! Fantastic my friend! Methinks you might ...hahaha! Fantastic my friend! Methinks you might be the magpie queen of marvellous metaphor this week.Jenniferhttp://www.jensrealia.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.com