
The Fourth
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Watermelon juice
turns toes blood red.
Seeds shoot out like
June bugs, dead.
turns toes blood red.
Seeds shoot out like
June bugs, dead.
Chicken legs, wax paper
covered deviled eggs
on tragic newsprint,
table spread.
Croquet weapons
scrap badminton birds;
wounds are mosquito bites,
scratched and bled.
wounds are mosquito bites,
scratched and bled.
Lidded jars of fireflies,
and sparklers pierce
our tired skies,
until the course of giant stars
stirs bursts of pride,
to fight the heart.
Force bias out
and melt the hate,
.
like ice cream on a sultry plate.
like ice cream on a sultry plate.
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Willow, 2009
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Best wishes to you and yours,
for a happy and safe July 4th from
Willow Manor.
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photo: Badminton by dannysoar







61 comments:
Brilliant Willow!
Have a wonderful 4th yourself.
:)
Whoa...most excellent Willow.
Most wonderous work, Willow! May you all enjoy the week-end!
Hi! Willow,
What a very lovely poem...that is so reminiscent of Summer, July, cool breezes, fun, childhood,
etc, etc, etc...Thanks, for sharing!
Willow, may you and your family have a safe and pleasant Fourth of July weekend too!
Take care!
DeeDee ;-D
That is a wonderful poem and it speaks of the 4th of July very well.
Here's wishing you and your family a Happy 4th of July.
May God protect our freedoms from those who want to take it away.
God bless America.
You really know how to play with words and you allways choose the best image to go with them!
wow!! i read it like a chant first and then back as prosepoetry and it works any which way you care. who knew!!! have a great fourth american friends!!! steven
Fabulous and celebratory!
Madame Willow.....you made me smile! Thanks! Wonderful poem!
I think that you managed to include all of my July 4th touchstones . . . except for peach cobbler. Have a happy one with food and friends, dear Willow!
Great imagery, brings back some nice memories. I love "ice cream on a sultry plate."
Happy 4th to you and your family, Willow!
Another gem, Willow--have a wonderful 4th! I was just saying to Joe that I'd heard on NPR that a lot of towns are hurting financially and won't be able to afford fireworks this year--I think that is just so sad. One of my favorite days of the year is our annual Independence day celebration. Happy 4th of July!
Same to you, my clever friend.
Perfect poem. Pass a couple of those devilled eggs my way, and enjoy the holiday!
What wonderful words, Willow. You should write more poetry.
Sorry I have not visited lately. I have been so busy. June, July and August are really busy for me.
I was just thinking about you the other day, wondering what I had missed.
Have a "Happy 4th of July."
And a happy Fourth to you! Love all the images -- is it just my perception or are sparklers little wimpy things now, nowhere as good as back in the Fifties? Probably due to safety regulations . . .
Powerful and moving imagery. Willow at her finest.
Great poem! Very engaging and "visual" words. - Jeanne
Nice!! I hope you have a safe and happy weekend as well!
oh your poem "sparks" so many vivid memories of july 4th celebrations. wonderful job!
have a great weekend, willow!
Amazing! Awesome! Flabbergasting! I love this!!! You caught it all!
Lovely, lovely poem. You captured the fourth perfectly.
I could have used this poem to go with my new header!
You describe all my July 4th celebrations as I was growing up...except we would have clam chowder and clam cakes instead of the chicken:)
Thank-you and Happy 4th!
Ahhhh - this brought back lazy memories of summer days that went on forever. Beautiful, my friend. Thank you.
And a happy Fourth to you, willow. (Just remember: you didn't break free, we let you go!)
Love, love, love the summers delight! Happy Holiday Weekend! :)
Beautiful, Willow. Happy 4th to you and yours.
Nice! happy 4th to you willow:)
Your poem captures the 4th of July spirit beautifully, Willow!
My fondest memories of July 4th are walking on the Mall in Washington DC and seeing all those picnics spread out there. I shall never forget the huge white peaches in a whicker basket I spied on my first picnic and the Beach Boys playing live there. Not to forget the fireworks!
I loved this poem. You are truly a wonderful poet. Every single one you have posted so far has put a spark in my soul. Many thanks and have a fab 4th July, you and and your family.
Greetings from London.
Hey, shoots the fireworks. I know everyone here will remember when they did. The dog that we loved so much hated the 4th of July and all its booming and banging. She nearly died each year from bewildered fright. So to her it was an annual nightmare. She is gone and that level of violence we shared with her is over.
I don't know the word "nosesses" and couldn't find it anywhere. And here I thought I knew everything. :)
Hey, shoots the fireworks. I know everyone here will remember when they did. The dog that we loved so much hated the 4th of July and all its booming and banging. She nearly died each year from bewildered fright. So to her it was an annual nightmare. She is gone and that level of violence we shared with her is over.
I don't know the word "nosesses" and couldn't find it anywhere. And here I thought I knew everything. :)
really really nice Willow!Have a lovely time!
Gorgeous poem, Willow. I have no idea of the 4th of July being Australian but your poem gives me a sense of the celebration. Enjoy your weekend, lovely Willow. xx
And this is what dreams are made of...our independence. Well put Willow, have a wonderful weekend and some s'mores!
A nice poem for your national day.
Have a happy 4th of July.
Oh, and put me down for a book of your poetry when it's published....
Lovely.
happy 4th willow. you captured it so well with your words. brilliant!
Wishing you a safe and happy 4th!
Beautiful poem, Willow. As an adult, I tend to get caught up in the preparations and neglect the pure joy of a summer celebration. Thanks for reminding the child in me to relax and have fun.
May your Independence Day be wonderful!
Have a great 4th of July :)
Happy 4th to you. love the poem.
You nailed it...just enough of everything and heart too! Happy Fourth of July!!!!
..."and melt the hate...like ice-cream"...just super!
Safe and fun to you and yours!!
A very happy week-end to all at willow manor.
You captured it:
totally.
Especially the fireflies.
I miss fireflies....
What a wonderful word picture of a traditional Fourth of July. Thank you:)
This poem put us into the mood for picnics, games and pride that heals the hate. Well done, Willow.
Love that first stanza "Watermelon juice turns toes blood red. Seeds shoot out like June bugs, dead." It's a perfect word picture.
A vivid & sometimes painfully recreation of July 4th as it often is. Boy, one of the few things I miss about the East is fireflies-- there aren't any in the West.
Hello Willow,
Here's hoping that you are all enjoying a great day at the Manor. Super poem!
Thanks for the holiday wishes. Back at you, Willow.
YES! That is exactly the fourth of July! LOVE this poem, Ms. Willow- brilliant!
Happy 4th Willow! I can hear all the fun you guys are having even way up here in Canada.
Great to hear the sound of so many happy people.
Wonderful poem Willow! Happy 4th of July!
wonderful bursting w/ summer energy!
hope the weekend is sparkly!!
Fantastic, Willow, I got the picture! Hope you had a happy day.
You have completely captured the essence of Independence Day. The way you blended the food images with the images of battle and the feeling of every American was just superb. I absolutely love that last line! Brava!
Kat
I love this slice of Americana, Willow style!
Hello. I happened on your blog quite by accident, (Incidentally, while searching for the line about land from Gone With the Wind), and fell in love. Your descriptions remind me so much of myself, and after reading the C.S. Lewis quote, I thought I'd say so. "What, you too?" :) I don't blog here, but I'm sure I'll come back to read your entries. If you happen to be on MySpace, I'm linked below.
You definitely paint with your words. I love it!
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